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"Simi stepped into the house, closing the door behind her" or even "Stepping in, Simi closed the door behind her" or even shorter "Simi swung-shut the door behind her" would be enough...

Or am I omitting any context with these shortened versions?

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Neeramitra Reddy
Neeramitra Reddy

Written by Neeramitra Reddy

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